I am Writing a movie, Here is the first scouple of scenes, let me know what you think and if you like I will share more.
Fade in:
Setting: Stereotypical suburban home – Bedroom
Time: Early Morning – summer
Attractive Man, Mid 30s attempting to convince wife to have sex.
Man: Come on Honey it's been so long, it's a beautiful day, show me how much you love me.
Wife: I told you no and I meant it. What is wrong with you, that’s all you think about. I got too much stuff to do today now get off me; I have to get into the shower.
Wife gets out of bed revealing ugly full length flannel pajamas.
Man: (sitting in bed looking very frustrated) well shits if she is going to be like ill just have sex with the same person I have been having sex with through our marriage.
'Masturbation Scene'
After ejaculation Wife comes out of bathroom completely dressed, no make up wearing typical soccer mom outfit: you are disgusting!! Clean yourself up and don’t use the good towels. Ill be back later tonight.
Wife storms out of room, Sound of car driving off
Close up of Man looking embarrassed – Fade out
Fade In:
Setting: 1st person P.O.V Driving car
Time: Morning
Man: (Speaking to himself) 14 year..14 fucking years!! What happened? I used to get laid anytime I wanted. She just let herself go, doesn’t want anything to do with me anymore, I work hard to provide a good home, I do everything she tells me to do without complaint and yet she still doesn’t do anything for me. (Starts to rub crotch) I'm still horny, fuck ill take anything right now!
Sees billboard for adult video store
Man (speaking to himself):hmm ive heard of those places….wonder what there like.
Drives past sees vehicles parking lot.
Man (speaking to himself): well if anything I can watch a good porn in private and relieve some pressure.
Drives into parking lot – Fade out.
Fade in:
Setting: walking through adult video store door (3rd person P.O.V)
Clerk behind desk: Can I help you?
Man: Umm sorry first time here don’t really know what to expect.
Cerk (Looking the man up and down with a sly smile): well what are you into?
Man: umm I don’t really know, what is there?
Clerk (laughing): Well we have some different options for you (walks around desk) here we have some video that are available for rent (close up on video boxes)
Mans eyes start getting wider
Continuing walking around store
Clerk: over here is the arcade where you can watch any of the movies we have playing and (clerk smiles) enjoy yourself.
Mans eyes get wider
Continue looking around
Clerk (With a Knowing Smile): And here is the theater.
Man: Theater?
Clerk yes, you can go in and watch our movies like a regular movie theater.
Man: Wow I didn’t realize just how much there were here.
Clerk: so…….anything I can do for you
Man: I think I will check out the arcade.
Clerk (walking back behind the counter still grinning): ok well you need to buy some tokens
Man hands clerk some cash
Fade out
Fade in:
Setting: Adult video arcade, various people standing around, the sounds of videos coming from behind closed doors. Looking around and sees a man giving another a blow job inside a room.
Man looks stunned and continues walking forward averting his gaze.
Man walks into a room in the back corner, locks door behind him, sticks tokens into video machine, bright light as video turns on. First movie is a gay 3 way, man pauses before switching channels. Goes through different channels finding mostly gay videos.
Man shrugs: oh well, never had a problem with it.
Looking down at buldge in jeans.
Man: well I need to relive some pressure
Pulls pants down to ankles and sits on chair, notices a hole in side of wall but shrugs it off.
Starts Masturbating
See fingers come through Hole in wall.
Man stares at fingers looking confused then down at hard cock, Look of surprise comes over mans face.
Stands up and nervously slids Cock into hole.
Camera in other booth:
Cock come through Hole, Attractive Blue color man on knees begins sucking mans cock.
Blue Collar man stops sucking and whispers through hole to unlock his door.
Man with look of pure passion on face unlocks door.
Blue collar man comes in drops to his knees
'Blow Job Scene'
Fade out:
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