What kinds do you guys like to read?
I have a few on my website but do not get much feedback,personally I feel like I get a bit "wordy"

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I tend to like to stories to be shorter.. Longer stories are a turn off for me.. Short and to the point

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If a story is longer than a couple of medium paragraphs, it has to be great or forget about it. If you want write alot, I suggest you try the cfs blog section.

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I feel like most stories go on too long. Get to the point. Tell me what you like and how it was, but get to the cum squirting finally before too long.

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Shorter is better. Get to the damn point already.

First person voice, "I", is better. Genuinely true stories are better.

If you use a third-person or "God's eye" viewpoint, there damn well better be only 2 characters or it's hard to follow and not worth it.

Never give last names - they're just irritating clutter.

NEVER, ever use the words "swirl", "smear" or "glans". They're stupid, over-used cliches only revealing how pathetic the writer is.

If I have to read one more LAME description of a blow job where the writer "swirled my tongue around his cockhead", I will throw up and that is no joke.

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Another peeve:

"With one push, he entered me. The pain was so intense, I screamed. But he covered me with his kiss [or: hand]. It began to feel pleasurable..."

LAME!!! BEEN DONE ALREADY!!! NOT EXCITING OR BELIEVABLE TO BEGIN WITH!!!

Not that I've seen it in your writing, TAT; only saying it in general, to anyone who may write.

Believe me - if the guy pushes in so fast/hard that you must literally cry out pain, it does NOT get better from there (or turn to pleasure) and is NOT AT ALL sexy.

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Any story that has me shooting cum all over myself is a good one - long or short.

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